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    Default new designed poetry :)

    Aik aur try
    ab itni jaldi to improve nhi hoga na

    lj947?t1299454676 - new designed poetry :)

    mistake bataye n zara guide karain
    ZqByl - new designed poetry :)

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    Quote Originally Posted by lovejeddah94 View Post
    Aik aur try
    ab itni jaldi to improve nhi hoga na

    lj947?t1299454676 - new designed poetry :)

    mistake bataye n zara guide karain
    nice try
    di O0F2 - new designed poetry :)

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    achi try hia leken u ne logo ko ku color kiya hai
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    Text work is pretty good but need to concentrate a lil on border work
    namilakerudaslogose - new designed poetry :)

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    very nice work
    app nay jo logo ko color kerna tha na wo hue ker kay kerna tha phir perfect color hota
    or shaodow na sahi nahi dia wa boarder ko i think

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    Quote Originally Posted by nida_ali_nido View Post
    Text work is pretty good but need to concentrate a lil on border work
    thanks
    han ab border ko improve krna hoga
    ZqByl - new designed poetry :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    achi try hia leken u ne logo ko ku color kiya hai
    Thank u sis
    aiwin dil kia
    ZqByl - new designed poetry :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rabi View Post
    very nice work
    app nay jo logo ko color kerna tha na wo hue ker kay kerna tha phir perfect color hota
    or shaodow na sahi nahi dia wa boarder ko i think

    hmm ok
    thanks
    ZqByl - new designed poetry :)

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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    Nice tryyyyyyy


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    Default Re: new designed poetry :)

    1 of my fav shair
    text clear hai
    clr kuch hmm grbr laga
    baki ahista ahista u perfect ho he jao ge des mai
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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