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    Default Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

    hi every1

    so here is a new competition.....

    this month you have to share poems On REMEBER

    rules :-

    • you can only share one poem
    • the poem should be about Remember
    • the closing date for competition is 21-09-2008


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    Do you remember...because I do

    I remember when you said I love you
    I remember when I said yeah me too

    I remember when you said love me
    I remember when you carved our names in that old oak tree

    I remember our first kiss
    and I ignored the fact that you missed

    I remember when you said together...always
    I remember when I stood in front of you dazzled and amazed

    I remember the sparkle in your eyes and
    I remember the tears you made me cry

    I remember when I could never be truly honest with you
    I remember me packing, and you asking is there anything that I can do

    I remember when I looked into your eyes and
    I remember when we said our goodbyes

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    an’t remember anything
    Can’t tell if this is true or dream
    Deep down inside I feel to scream
    This terrible silence stops me

    Now that the war is through with me
    I’m waking up I can not see
    That there is not much left of me
    Nothing is real but pain now

    Hold my breath as I wish for death
    Oh please god,wake me

    Hold my breath as I wish for death
    Oh please god,wake me
    Now the world is gone I’m just one
    Oh god,help me hold my breath as I wish for death
    Oh please God help me


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    I remember you as you were in the last autumn.
    You were the grey beret and the still heart.
    In your eyes the flames of the twilight fought on.
    And the leaves fell in the water of your soul.

    Clasping my arms like a climbing plant
    the leaves garnered your voice, that was slow and at peace.
    Bonfire of awe in which my thirst was burning.
    Sweet blue hyacinth twisted over my soul.

    I feel your eyes traveling, and the autumn is far off:
    grey beret, voice of a bird, heart like a house
    towards which my deep longings migrated
    and my kisses fell, happy as embers.

    Sky from a ship. Field from the hills:
    Your memory is made of light, of smoke, of a still pond!
    Beyond your eyes, farther on, the evenings were blazing.
    Dry autumn leaves revolved in your soul.
    2112kjd - Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

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    Default Re: Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

    nice sharing every1

    main b share kerti hun baad main





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    Default Re: Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

    nice comp naz



    my sharing:


    I remember

    I remember the day we met

    I remember it all too well

    I remember how we started

    And I remember how we ended

    I remember how it feels with

    Your lips touching mine

    I remember what it's like in your arms

    I remember what you told me

    I remember what I promised

    I remember that day we spent together

    I remember all my tears

    I remember those pictures of us

    I remember you used to wait

    For me after every class

    I remember what you said to me

    I remember how much it hurt

    I remember asking wondering why

    I remember our last kiss

    I remember you walking away

    I remember my life being ++++ed out

    I remember my heart going with you

    I remember all the pain you put me through

    I remember, do you?

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    I remember my first days at school
    How the building seemed so big

    I remember our headmistress
    Her face was sprouting hair
    I remember I was always told
    Not to look it’s rude to stare

    I remember all the screaming
    From the children how they cried
    I remember double swinging doors
    That seemed so very wide

    I remember in the sandpit
    Pouring water-making slush
    I remember teacher telling us
    Let’s have a little hush

    I remember cold school dinners
    How the dinner ladies shout
    I remember most of all I think
    When they told us school was out



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    Forget,
    just forget,
    forget those promises,
    forget the butterflies you used to get,
    forget the way he made you feel,
    forget he ever held you tight,
    forget when you walked together in the rain,
    forget those phone calls late at night,
    forget the loving eyes,
    forget the minutes you had together
    forget the time that you used,
    just forget.

    Remember all the nights you cried,
    remember all the promises he broke,
    Remember wishing you could have died,
    Remember all the lies he told,
    remember the way he left you alone,
    remember the way he avoided you,
    remember how he ignored your calls,
    remember how he broke your heart,
    Remember how he tore your world apart

    Just forget all the good times,
    Remember all the pain,
    Just try and forget,
    everything about him,
    forget his name,
    lose his number,
    just forget


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    Default Re: Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

    nicxe sharingzzzz

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    Default Re: Competition Of The Month Sep 2008

    nice sharing all...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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