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    Default maut kaa khel kyuN ?????

    sachii dosti waaloN ko Khayaal kaa salaam
    CRICKET match haarne ke Gham meN aur lowgoN kee ta"Anah zanee ne kuchh aiHbaab ko Khudkushee karne par aamadah kiyaa,meree yeh taiHreer un tamaam aiHbaab kee nazr jo Hindustan aur Pakistan ke maabayen hone waale CRICKET MATCH ko anaa kaa yaa izzat kaa mu'Aamlah samajhte haiN

    arz e Khidmat hai

    humaaree haar se tum ne bhalaa kyuN Khudkushee karlee
    milaa kyaa jaan khone se GhamoN meN kyaa kamee karlee

    jise kaihtee hai dunyaa khel tum bhee khel usey samjho
    banaa kar mas'alah tum ne ajeeran zindagee karlee

    amaanat zindagee hai yeh Khudaa kee dee hu'ee har pal
    kyuN tum ne iss amaanat meN Khayaanat kee sa'Eee karlee

    tumhaaree jaaNfishaanee sab akaarat ho ga'ee dekho
    miley gee abb sazaa tum ko keh Haalat kufr kee karlee

    humaaree haar hum ko yeh sabaq detee hai jeene kaa
    hu'ee jab teergee tow dil jalaa kar raushnee karlee

    "Khayaal" hum ne tow jeevan se yehee aNdaaz seekhaa hai
    milaa jab bhee nayaa Gham dil lubhaane ko Khushee karlee

    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal

    kheltowkhelhai - maut kaa khel kyuN ?????
    Last edited by Ismail Ajaz; 03-04-2011 at 10:05 AM.
    اسماعیل اعجاز خیال
    محبتوں سے محبت سمیٹنے والا
    خیال آپکی محفل میں آج پھر آیا
    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal
    muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne waalaa
    "Khayaal"aapkee maiHfil meN aaj phir aayaa

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    Default Re: maut kaa khel kyuN ?????

    w.salam
    mai apke ibtedaaiya se ikhtalaaf rakhta hun lekin kyon ke poetry per commetn dene hain isliy poetry tak hi rehta hun.

    @ topic. boht acha likha... aapka takhallus bhi pasnd aaya mujhe
    words ka selection aur mesg acha aur sahi tha poetry mai...acha likhte hain..appreciated keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    w.salam
    mai apke ibtedaaiya se ikhtalaaf rakhta hun lekin kyon ke poetry per commetn dene hain isliy poetry tak hi rehta hun.

    @ topic. boht acha likha... aapka takhallus bhi pasnd aaya mujhe
    words ka selection aur mesg acha aur sahi tha poetry mai...acha likhte hain..appreciated keep it up

    janaab zarrah nawaazee hai aap kee inaayat hai aapKee

    beHad shukrguzaar hooN maiN aap kaa
    اسماعیل اعجاز خیال
    محبتوں سے محبت سمیٹنے والا
    خیال آپکی محفل میں آج پھر آیا
    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal
    muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne waalaa
    "Khayaal"aapkee maiHfil meN aaj phir aayaa

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    Default Re: maut kaa khel kyuN ?????

    bht acha likha hai
    log pagal hiana khail ke peche
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Zaberdast
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    Default Re: maut kaa khel kyuN ?????

    nice

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    اچھی غزل ہے، بعض مصرعوں میں وزن کا مسئلہ ہے، جو تھوڑی سی توجہ سے حل کیا جاسکتا ہے، علاوہ ازیں عمدہ غزل ہے، بہت خوش رہیں
    love thou - maut kaa khel kyuN ?????

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    bht acha likha hai
    log pagal hiana khail ke peche

    maiN aap kaa beHad shukrguzaar hooN
    اسماعیل اعجاز خیال
    محبتوں سے محبت سمیٹنے والا
    خیال آپکی محفل میں آج پھر آیا
    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal
    muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne waalaa
    "Khayaal"aapkee maiHfil meN aaj phir aayaa

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mi$hoo View Post
    Zaberdast

    Allah Khush rakkhe aap ko beHad shukriyah aap kaa
    اسماعیل اعجاز خیال
    محبتوں سے محبت سمیٹنے والا
    خیال آپکی محفل میں آج پھر آیا
    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal
    muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne waalaa
    "Khayaal"aapkee maiHfil meN aaj phir aayaa

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sadaf View Post
    nice

    Khush rahiye
    اسماعیل اعجاز خیال
    محبتوں سے محبت سمیٹنے والا
    خیال آپکی محفل میں آج پھر آیا
    Ismail Ajaz Khayaal
    muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne waalaa
    "Khayaal"aapkee maiHfil meN aaj phir aayaa

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