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    Default KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    Suno !
    mein aik khawahish ki titli hoon
    jo par laga kar urjana chahti hoon
    mein rangon ke sabze ke des mein
    kho jana chahti hon

    mein taron se baatein karna chahti hoon
    sab se door
    wadiyon titlyon ke jhurmat mein
    fiza mein haath phela kar
    ankhein moond kar
    un haseen lamhon ko amar karna chahti hoon

    mujhe muddat guzar gayi sukh ka saans liye
    ab mein khuli fiza mein
    sukh ka saans lena chati hoon
    aur dekho in haseen palon ne
    mere honton per
    kesi muskaan saja di hai

    ke mein apna aap tak bhula bethi hoon
    dekho mein sach much kho gayi hun..
    mujhe us samay se pyaar ho gaya hai
    un rangon titliyon se
    mein ishq kar bethi hon

    suno ab mujhe wapas mat bulana
    mein ab humesha is pal
    Is haseen des mein rehna chahti hon
    suno mein titliyon jugnouon ke
    des mein rehna chahti hoon
    kitni Bekhud ho gayi hoon na??
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    wwwwooww

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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    very nice..................


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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    khiyal bht acha hai sis
    bus rawani mein thori kami hai

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    Quote Originally Posted by akiller View Post
    wwwwooww
    Quote Originally Posted by dhanak View Post
    very nice..................
    Quote Originally Posted by Hijaab View Post
    khiyal bht acha hai sis
    bus rawani mein thori kami hai
    thank you everyone
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    accha likha hai Mish siso 2 gud


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by SanoriTa View Post
    accha likha hai Mish siso 2 gud
    ahan thanx
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    Bohat acha likha hai... bich mei sirf aik jagha flow kharab hoa aur personly i think..last line nahi honi chaye thi.. ya upper kahin arrange honi chaye thi..

    over all boht acha likha hai
    keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Halaku Khan View Post
    Bohat acha likha hai... bich mei sirf aik jagha flow kharab hoa aur personly i think..last line nahi honi chaye thi.. ya upper kahin arrange honi chaye thi..

    over all boht acha likha hai
    keep it up
    Thanks alot halaku khan
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: KhawahiSh ki Titli..!!!

    agree 2 Hijaab and Killer
    baki khayal bht acha hia...last line shuro main kahe ajati tu
    hum b ready rehtey ke end aisa hona.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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