hmmmmmmmm nice![]()
hmmmmmmmm nice![]()
thank u
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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB
Umda shair hayper agr asa hota to bahter nahi tha ?
mere naseeb mein tu nahi to kya howa
Sath mere guzre pal ki yaadain hi bohat hai
FeamnAllah![]()
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theek hia lakin likhte waqt mujhe ye bettr laga
Assalam-oA_likuM WRW B
Chalo phir jo shair mai nay likha hay wo mai lay loon :O kal ko kahan maat shair churayta hay![]()
FeamnAllah
lolz le lo koi baat nahi itna bara dil to mera b hai![]()
Mashallah boht khoob likha aap nay
boht pasand aya
ik baat ki taraf twaja dilana chahta hon
shairi ki zuban roze mara ki guftago say mukhtalif hoti hay
is main rythum naghmagi or rachao hota hay
captian midnight nay acha mashwara dia
magar main thor c tarmeem karna chahon ga.
yeh shair agar is tarah ho to aap ka kia khial hay?
mere naseeb mein tu nahi to kya howa
Sath tere guzre pal ki yaadain hi bohat hai
kush rahain or likhti rahain
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