**Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

[withlove]

Zain Sahib ki nazr..

[naz]

itni jaldi katam ..aik ure bad ap ki ghazal parhe hia..maza agaya.

2nd shair umda hia

[asif shahzad]

wha wha wha kia batt hi buhat umdha ghzal hi

[ifrazmi]

wah ji wah, bohat achee ghazal kahi hay aap nay, abhi zain sahab ke ghazal parh ker aa raha hun, unhoN ne to khoob likha he hy, aap ne bhi un kee zameen main ghazal keh ker unhen acha khiraj paish kiya.

donon ghazaloN ka maza aa gaya.

[dreamer]

waah waah,,kiya kahnay hain yaar,,ghazal likhi hay or kamal kiya,,rawani or taghazzul bay panaah hay..share muntakhib krna mushkil horaha hay..matla sab say umda raha,,boht saari daad tumharay liye ji,,,boht saari ka matlab hay kay itni jitni tumhary daman main na aasakay

[ishtiaq zain]

Zain Sahib ki nazar..

arrey wah!!!
is qadar khoobsurat tohfa merey liye,aor mujhey khabar hi naheen,
be had mamnoon hoon bhahi is izzat afzaayi ke liye,
ghazal aap ne bila shubah be had khoobsurat kahi hai,har aek sheir doosarey se baR ke achha laga,aor siwa lutf diya,dheron mubaarak baad aor daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
aek chhoti si tajweez bhi hai,agar mumkin ho to dekh lijiey ga,
sheir #2 ka pehla misra agar yoon kar lain ke......

dil naheen maanta,be wafa shakhs hai
jaantey bhoojatey jo dagha de gaya

to sheir ki khoobsurati baR jaaye gi merey khayaal main,aor wazn main bhi aa jaaye ga,
is muhabbat ke liye aek baar phir bahot shukriya,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot khubsuart ghazal kaahi hay WL

Mazeed intazar rahy ga

FeamNAllah

[primitive]

Aik mudat kay baad aap ki taraf say kuch parhnay ko milla sari tashnagi or shikayat door ho gai boht hi khoob likha or kamal ka likha sadgi rawani rachao rythum sehal magar mouzon alfaz ka chunao sonay per suhaga mukhtasar behar main kia heh kehnay parh kar lutf aa gia boht c daad aap ki is khobsorat kawash ki nazarkush rahain or likhtay rahin

[Rani]

zaberdast poem hai

[Hijaab]

superb as usual