Intabaah,(nazam)

[ishtiaq zain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
chand ultey seedhey alfaaz,nazam ki soorat haazir hain,bardaasht kijiye ga,
aor apni aara dena bilkul naheen bhooliye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[sheem]

wah bohat hi zaberdast

kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k

[ishtiaq zain]

wah bohat hi zaberdast

kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k

bahot shukriya Sheem saahiba,ke aap ne waqt nikaala,aor khoobsurat alfaaz main pazeeraayi ki,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Rani]

mohbbat tum nahi karna

yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya

[ishtiaq zain]

mohbbat tum nahi karna

yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya

ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[Rani]

ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

yah toh aapki shayeri ak husan hai, k wo kisi k jazbaat ki hu bahu tarjumani karti hai

aapki duaoon ka be-hadh shukriya

[dreamer]

kiya khoob lafzon ka jaado jagaya hay yaar jaani!lagta hay jesay kisi musawwir nay apnay bursh say,nihayet nazakt say mohabbat naam ki haseena kay nain naqsh banaiy hain,,nazm hay goya naqsha gari hay...mery pas daad kay liye alfaaz naheen...bas itn akhon ga kay ye nazm naheen balkay aik tasweer us haseena ki jis ka naam mohabbt hay!

[ishtiaq zain]

kiya khoob lafzon ka jaado jagaya hay yaar jaani!lagta hay jesay kisi musawwir nay apnay bursh say,nihayet nazakt say mohabbat naam ki haseena kay nain naqsh banaiy hain,,nazm hay goya naqsha gari hay...mery pas daad kay liye alfaaz naheen...bas itn akhon ga kay ye nazm naheen balkay aik tasweer us haseena ki jis ka naam mohabbt hay!

ab kaya kahoon Zubair,tum ne to mujhey Aasamaan pe la bithaaya hai,aor main soch raha hoon ke neechey kesey utrooN,.....seeRhi to tum saath hi le gaye ho,
is qadar khuley dil se aor purkhaloos pazeerayi ke liye be had mamnoon hoon,
yeh sab tum jesey doston ki muhabbat ka samar hai,jo mujhey mil raha hai,
bahot khush raho,

[ishtiaq zain]

yah toh aapki shayeri ak husan hai, k wo kisi k jazbaat ki hu bahu tarjumani karti hai

aapki duaoon ka be-hadh shukriya

aap ki zara nawaazi hai,jo aap aesa samajhti hain,aor is ke siwa kuchh naheen,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Hijaab]

intibah......pekar...ranjour...mojab......aazaar............ paimber..tairgi..........pehlay in alfaaz ko hamein explain karein...zara detail mein!

and secondly............hon gay yeh ultay seedhay alfaaz.....lekin hein laajwab
superbly written!