Intabaah,(nazam)

[ishtiaq zain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
chand ultey seedhey alfaaz,nazam ki soorat haazir hain,bardaasht kijiye ga,
aor apni aara dena bilkul naheen bhooliye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[sheem]

wah bohat hi zaberdast

kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k

[Rani]

mohbbat tum nahi karna

yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya

[Hijaab]

intibah......pekar...ranjour...mojab......aazaar............ paimber..tairgi..........pehlay in alfaaz ko hamein explain karein...zara detail mein!

and secondly............hon gay yeh ultay seedhay alfaaz.....lekin hein laajwab
superbly written!

[ishtiaq zain]

wah bohat hi zaberdast

kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k

bahot shukriya Sheem saahiba,ke aap ne waqt nikaala,aor khoobsurat alfaaz main pazeeraayi ki,
bahot khush rahiye,

[ishtiaq zain]

mohbbat tum nahi karna

yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya

ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[ishtiaq zain]

intibah......pekar...ranjour...mojab......aazaar............ paimber..tairgi..........pehlay in alfaaz ko hamein explain karein...zara detail mein!

and secondly............hon gay yeh ultay seedhay alfaaz.....lekin hein laajwab
superbly written!

sab se pehley to nazam ki pasandeedagi aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
mujhey bahot achha laga ke aap ko jin alfaaz ki samajh naheen aayi,aap ne pooch liya,jab tak alfaaz ka matlab na pata ho,kissi bhi qisam ki shaairy maza naheen deti,aap ke is sawaal se aek baat to bahot waazeya huyi ke aap shaairy ko samajh kar parna chaahati hain,aor rasman wah wah naheen karti,jo ke bahot achhi baat hai,

alfaaz ka matlab kuchh yoon hai,......

intibah......khabardaar karna,ya hona, aagaahi,
pekar.....chehra,shakl,soorat,
ranjour...bimaar,afsurda,maghmoom,
mojab......sabab,baais,wajah....wesey...farz,waajib,waajib karney waala,laazim karney waala,..ke ma.anon main bhi istamaal hota hai,
aazaar......dukh,bimaari,marz,takleef,sakhti,
paimber....peghaam pohanchaaney waala,......******bar,ya nabbi bhi keh saktey hain,
tairgi........taareeki,andhera,sayaahi,

itna kaafi hai ya mazeed wazaahat ki zaroorat hai,.....agar mazeed zaroorat mehsoos karain to bila jhijhak poochh sakti hain,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Rani]

ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

yah toh aapki shayeri ak husan hai, k wo kisi k jazbaat ki hu bahu tarjumani karti hai

aapki duaoon ka be-hadh shukriya

[dreamer]

kiya khoob lafzon ka jaado jagaya hay yaar jaani!lagta hay jesay kisi musawwir nay apnay bursh say,nihayet nazakt say mohabbat naam ki haseena kay nain naqsh banaiy hain,,nazm hay goya naqsha gari hay...mery pas daad kay liye alfaaz naheen...bas itn akhon ga kay ye nazm naheen balkay aik tasweer us haseena ki jis ka naam mohabbt hay!

[Hijaab]

sab se pehley to nazam ki pasandeedagi aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
mujhey bahot achha laga ke aap ko jin alfaaz ki samajh naheen aayi,aap ne pooch liya,jab tak alfaaz ka matlab na pata ho,kissi bhi qisam ki shaairy maza naheen deti,aap ke is sawaal se aek baat to bahot waazeya huyi ke aap shaairy ko samajh kar parna chaahati hain,aor rasman wah wah naheen karti,jo ke bahot achhi baat hai,

alfaaz ka matlab kuchh yoon hai,......

intibah......khabardaar karna,ya hona, aagaahi,
pekar.....chehra,shakl,soorat,
ranjour...bimaar,afsurda,maghmoom,
mojab......sabab,baais,wajah....wesey...farz,waajib,waajib karney waala,laazim karney waala,..ke ma.anon main bhi istamaal hota hai,
aazaar......dukh,bimaari,marz,takleef,sakhti,
paimber....peghaam pohanchaaney waala,......******bar,ya nabbi bhi keh saktey hain,
tairgi........taareeki,andhera,sayaahi,

itna kaafi hai ya mazeed wazaahat ki zaroorat hai,.....agar mazeed zaroorat mehsoos karain to bila jhijhak poochh sakti hain,
bahot khush rahiye,

Assalamo-Alekam!
Jazak ALLAH Khair!
Bohat achi explantions di hein aap nay, hamein samjh aa gayen sab words.
Khush Rahiye and keep teaching us!