chupp chupp k rona penda ay
zaberdast hai Hijab![]()
chupp chupp k rona penda ay
zaberdast hai Hijab![]()
Last edited by Rani; 14-04-2008 at 03:00 PM.
Jazak ALLAH Rani for liking!
overall buhat achi likhi hai Hijab ap nay
lakin ik do jaga me ko laga keh ager ap aisay likhti tu kaisa lagta
mean jesay 2nd line main
Akhiyan Wich Hanjowan Diyan Lehran Wagdiyan Aye
kerti tu kaisa lagta?
or ik Chaan Ki Jaga Chanani Raat ker leti tu or acha lagta...
or last line jo ap nay likhi hai us ki mujay samhj nahi ayi...![]()
bas yeh me k views hain...lakin me ko pasand ayi hai ap ki poetry..as u know me ko punjabi poetry buhat pasand hai..![]()
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SD ki Basanti
Chal DhanoOo
I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....
bohat bohat nawazish dear Dua....
aap nay apni qeemti aara say nawaza........aap ka bohat bohat shukriya!
wisar ka matlab hota hai kay kise cheez ka adhay rastay he chout jaana......namukamil rehna
shayd hum sahi taran say poerty ki shakil mein nahi dhal sakay!
aray nahi jani..me koi samhj nahi a rahi thi keh likha kaya hai,...me ko nahi pata tha keh wesar ka yeh matlab hai...ais liye kaha tha keh last line ki samhj nahi ayi...
buhat achi likhi hai ap nay poem..![]()
ainda b likhiye ga punjabi poetry me ko pasand hai...![]()
...me say likhi he nahi jati punjabi poetry..
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SD ki Basanti
Chal DhanoOo
I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....
bahot khoob Hijaab,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
albata wazn ka masla beharhaal mojood hai,jo ke aahista aahista hi hal ho ga,
so bas mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,umeed hai ke jald hi kuchh seekhaney sikhaaney ka silsila yahaan shuru kiya jaaye ga,yaqeenan aap ko kaafi madad miley gi us se,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,![]()
Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
Assalamo-Alekam!
Aap sab ki qeemti aa'ra kay mamnoun hein hum. Bohat bohat nawazish!
Humein Panjabi Nahin Aati Warna Islaah Zaroor Kar Dete