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  1. 14-04-2008, 02:49 AM #1
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    candel Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Please do tell me my mistakes. Jazak ALLAH!
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    aray wah buhat he zaberdast likha hai ap nay hijab..


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    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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  3. 14-04-2008, 03:07 AM #3
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    shukriya sister!
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    bahot khoob Hijaab,ghazal-e-musalsal kehney ki achhi koshish ki aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
    bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    Bohat khoob.. bari achi koshish rahi .. safar jari rakhiye.. akhri shair mein aap ne qafiya gardanta istemaal kiya.. jo ke ghabrata, katrata waghaira ka hum'qafiya hai hi nahi .. dekh lijiye ga.. aur jinti likhen gi .. rawani utni hi aati jaye gi.. daad hazir hai .. qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    too good peom Hijab
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    bahoot khoob Hijab nice poetry
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    Wow Nice Sharing

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    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Aap sab kay qeemti comments ka bohat bohat shukriya.
    Jazak ALLAH Khair!
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    Default Re: Usay Aaj Bhi Phool Pasand Hein!

    ahan!boht achi kawish hay...boht hi umda sha,ir ho bhai tum to... poori ghazal umda hay..albatta gardaanta ky qafiye ko daikh lo...sha,iri to tumhari aisi hay kay main hairan or angusht ba dandaan hon
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