buhat achi likhi hai Hijab jani..![]()
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buhat achi likhi hai Hijab jani..![]()
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SD ki Basanti
Chal DhanoOo
I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....
achhi koshish hai Hijaab,bas yoonhi mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,:rose
bahot khush rahiye,![]()
Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
wha buhat umdha
boht hi achi nazm hay...or aasaar bata rahay hain kay aagay ja kay tum boht hi achi sha,iri kero gi!
is nazm main aik ghalati hay..jis ki waja say hi ham nay urdu imla ka sabaq shuro kiya hay.. tum nay likha barkha o badal
tum nay apni jagah bilkul theek likha hay...laikin choon kay tumhain ilm nahi hay is liye aisa likha... urdu main izaafat ka istamaal isrf arabi or farsi lafzoon kay darmiyan jaaiz hay.. barkha or badal donon hindi kay lafz hain... lihaza in kay darmiyan ham izafat ka istamaal nahi kr saktay.. inshaAllah tumhen boht jald hindi lafzon ki shanakht bhi hojaaiy gi
in sab baton say ma siwa nazm boht umda or rawan dawan hay! jitni marzi daad chaho lay lo![]()
Wah Bohot Khoob
choti si piyari si nazam achi lagi
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