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  1. 16-04-2008, 03:31 AM #1
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    candel Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Is nazam ko hum nay kuch t'weel karnay ki koshish ki thi......magar phir nahi ker sakay.
    Aap ki qeemti aa'ra ka intizar rahey ga!

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    buhat achi likhi hai Hijab jani..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!
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    achhi koshish hai Hijaab,bas yoonhi mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,:rose
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  4. 16-04-2008, 07:00 AM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    buhat achi likhi hai Hijab jani..
    shukriya Dua ji

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    achhi koshish hai Hijaab,bas yoonhi mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,:rose
    bahot khush rahiye,
    bohat nawazish!
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  5. 16-04-2008, 08:12 AM #5
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    wha buhat umdha
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    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    wha buhat umdha
    boht hi achi nazm hay...or aasaar bata rahay hain kay aagay ja kay tum boht hi achi sha,iri kero gi!
    is nazm main aik ghalati hay..jis ki waja say hi ham nay urdu imla ka sabaq shuro kiya hay.. tum nay likha barkha o badal
    tum nay apni jagah bilkul theek likha hay...laikin choon kay tumhain ilm nahi hay is liye aisa likha... urdu main izaafat ka istamaal isrf arabi or farsi lafzoon kay darmiyan jaaiz hay.. barkha or badal donon hindi kay lafz hain... lihaza in kay darmiyan ham izafat ka istamaal nahi kr saktay.. inshaAllah tumhen boht jald hindi lafzon ki shanakht bhi hojaaiy gi
    in sab baton say ma siwa nazm boht umda or rawan dawan hay! jitni marzi daad chaho lay lo
    love thou - Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!
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    Wah Bohot Khoob
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    Default Re: Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!

    choti si piyari si nazam achi lagi

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  9. 17-04-2008, 02:24 AM #9
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    Default Re: Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!

    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    wha buhat umdha
    shukriya!

    Quote Originally Posted by Đŕemẹr View Post
    boht hi achi nazm hay...or aasaar bata rahay hain kay aagay ja kay tum boht hi achi sha,iri kero gi!
    is nazm main aik ghalati hay..jis ki waja say hi ham nay urdu imla ka sabaq shuro kiya hay.. tum nay likha barkha o badal
    tum nay apni jagah bilkul theek likha hay...laikin choon kay tumhain ilm nahi hay is liye aisa likha... urdu main izaafat ka istamaal isrf arabi or farsi lafzoon kay darmiyan jaaiz hay.. barkha or badal donon hindi kay lafz hain... lihaza in kay darmiyan ham izafat ka istamaal nahi kr saktay.. inshaAllah tumhen boht jald hindi lafzon ki shanakht bhi hojaaiy gi
    in sab baton say ma siwa nazm boht umda or rawan dawan hay! jitni marzi daad chaho lay lo
    bohat bohat shukriya Sir Ji!
    aap nay apnay tafseeli tabsray say nawaza aur ghaltiyon ki nishan-dehi bhi karwaye
    bohat maskhoor hein


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    Wah Bohot Khoob
    bohat shukriya


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    choti si piyari si nazam achi lagi

    shukriya behna ji
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  10. 17-04-2008, 08:29 PM #10
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    Default Re: Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!

    Bohat khoob.. nazm pasand aayee.. daad hazir hai .. qabool kijiye.. Nawazish

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    koitaveezho - Teri Yaad Kay Barkha-Badal!

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....
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