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    asking Mohabbat....aik uljhee girrah

    wo abhe aik chota sa bacha he to tha.....jb usay mohabbat krnay ka dars diya gia tha.......usay aaj bhe yaad hai....wo taat school.....jahan maula bakhsh ne usay mahabbat ka pehla dars diya tha...usay aaj bhe pnay ustaad ke maar yaad hai ..jo usay is liye paree thee.....k us k school bag se kahanion ke kitaab kion niklee...baat to aam se the.....aik bachay ke aik choti se khwahish......kissi paree ko jaanay ke...kissi zaalim dev ke.....usay youn laga tha k jese us ne aaj wo zaalim dev daikh liya ho....ustaad kehtay thay(usay maula bakhsh istemaal krnay wala her shakhs he ustad laga).......daikho....abhe tm bachay ho.....tm sirf 8 saal k he to ho....abhe se tmharay ye kaam hien.....perhai mean tm achay ho....to kion krtay ho aisay kaam.....
    wahin se us ne seekha tha...k abhe to wo bacha hai....abhe to us ne bohat kuch krna hai..

    aik safaid posh ghr ka bacha....is liye school nai jata ka usay ishq hota hai.....perhae se..apnay maqsad se....wo to sirf is liye jaataa hai school....k sb jatay hien wahan...aur udher khailnay k liye bohat waqat hota hai.....
    kabhe kbhe usay apni maan ke ankhoun mean aansoo nazr atay to bechain ho k poochta...amaa.....tm bhe roti ho.....tm to bacha nai ho....usay tb pata kahan tha ka bachay to sirf rona jaantay hien......un k liye ansoo to sirf aik izhaar hotay hien...apne naaraazgee zahir krnay ka....apni baat manwanay ka...

    kabhee kabhee usay apnay abba bhe yaad atay thay....such to ye he k bachay ko abba is liye yaad naee ata k wo us se pyar krta hai....haan wo manosiat...jisay bacha koi naam nai day skta...wo yaad ati.....wo sochta tha k us k abba kahan gai...kion soe rehtay hien us k school k qareen aik jaga...jahan aur bhe bohat se loag soe hue hien...abba ka ghr bhe to hai....wo wahan kion nai sotay.....aur ye kahan ka insaaf hai k usay to subuh he subuh jaga diya jata tha.....k school jao...mgr abba ko to koi nai jagata ...k utho...aur koi un ka pass bhe to nai jata tha.....haan kbhe kbhe...tptee dopehr ko...jb sb ghr walay soe hotay....ya phir us din..jb school mean usay maula bakhsh ne kuch sikhaya hota...to wo abba k paass...un k sir ke jaanib lagay peeple ke chaaon mean betha ya to rotaa rehta..ya phr jee bhr k un se baatien krta rehta.....akser uoun hua tha k qareeb k gher se baba Nazra usay apne gaud mean uthay sulagtay din ke garmee se bacha k apnay saath lay jata....aur usay kuch na kuch khanay ko deta....us waqt usay baba nazra pata nai kia lgta...wo uskee gaod mean betha.....khailta rehta....kbhe kbhe wo poochta tha....baba,,,tmharay jissm se ye boo jo aati hia kiss cheez ke hai...mgr ander he ander us boo se us ke gehree shanasaee the....wo ankhean band kiye bhe soya hota...to baba nazray ke isi boo se pehchaan leta..jb bhe usay abba k pass so sota hua utha k ghr laya jata to khoob rota tha....us waqat ass k amma ke ankhoun mean jo namee se aa jati the..us nami ne usay waqat se pehlay boorha bana diya tha shaid...

    gher mean chota tha..so us ka khyaal bohat rkha jata....usay kbhe kisi cheez se gila na tha...gila tha to sirf aik baat pe k ghr walay usay chai kion nai detay...bacha tha..janta nai tha k zindagee sirf chai ke talab to nai ..haan usay aik aur ehsaas bhe tha ...k usay doctor banana hai...us k abba jb sotay nai thay to kaha krtay thay..
    "mera ey puttr doghdaar bnsee tay meda elaaj krsee""

    wo sochta tha...k ye daghdaar(doctor) kion bntay hien loag..us k mohallay mean bhe aik aadmee tha...safaid darhee...moti se ankhean....mgr bohat meetha lehja...jb bhe baat krta to "putar"" keh k bulata tha....wo sochta...aisay hotay hien doctor..nai bnana mjhe aisa...ye to bilkul chachay ke tarah hai...usay lgta k doctor to shaid chachay nai hotay.,,,un ke badee se pagree hoti ho gee...aur jb wo kissi k paas jatay houngay.....to sb unse jhuk k miltay houngay.....aur apni ser ke chadar bichatay houngay.....agr aaj bhe us bachay k ander kuch narmee hoti...to shaid ye usee doctor se lee hue hoti...
    Suno Loago.....!!
    Mairi Aankhain Kharido gay?????
    Mujhay Ik KHAWAB ka Taawaan bhernaa Hai........

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    Default Re: Mohabbat....aik uljhee girrah

    acha hay janab,,abhi poora nahi parha,,,,jitna parha hay wo acha hay,,yaar isay koshish kr kay inpage kiya karo to lutf dochand hojaiy ,,,khoob likhtay ho ji

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    Default Re: Mohabbat....aik uljhee girrah

    Wah Zabardast Bohot Khoob Likha Hai

    Likhte Rahein

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