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  1. 27-04-2008, 09:34 PM #1
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    candel Aisa Nahi Hai Kay Tanha Nahi Hein!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    So far hum nay jitni bhi ulti seedhi shayri likhi hai us mein say hamein apni yeh wali kuch had achi lagi hai!
    Is mein hum nay shayri kay qawaid -zawabat ko made-nazar rakhnay ki koshish ki hai.
    LEKIN, aik mistake phir bhi hai, aik shair mein hum radeef ki pabandi nahi ker sakay!
    Aap ki qeemti aa'ra ka intizar rahey ga!

    tanhanahihien - Aisa Nahi Hai Kay Tanha Nahi Hein!
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  2. 27-04-2008, 09:48 PM #2
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    Yaar hijab jab phele kuch pata nahi tha tu sub kitna acha lagta tha
    ab jab sub samj agaya hia ke kahan kahan ghalati hoti hia tu

    bhot ghalitiyan hian



    waise achi hai leken tum isko sahe karsakti ho karo na tumhe tu itna acha likhna ata hai
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  3. 27-04-2008, 09:58 PM #3
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    ghaltiyan batayey na aapi
    hum ko abhi ini achi kahan likhni aati hai
    aap tou hum say pehlay ki likhtey ho
    kuch ghaltiyan aap bhi tou nikalein na
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  4. 27-04-2008, 10:54 PM #4
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    nice try mujhe kuch samajh nahi ayee kiyon kay mein nay read hee nahi kiya bcz it'so boring
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  5. 27-04-2008, 11:50 PM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by Geo View Post
    nice try mujhe kuch samajh nahi ayee kiyon kay mein nay read hee nahi kiya bcz it'so boring

    Is Tarah Nahin Kehna Chahiye Aap Ko
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    Thx 4 The Beautifull Sharing
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    Mohobbat Main Wafa Ke Kaayil Hum Bhi Hain Doston

    Haan Magar Is Main Jaan Se Jaayein Is Kaabil Hum Nahin Hain


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    Jazak ALLAH ST & Geo!
    khush rahiye
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  9. 28-04-2008, 01:21 AM #9
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    Default Re: Aisa Nahi Hai Kay Tanha Nahi Hein!

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Assalamo-Alekam!
    So far hum nay jitni bhi ulti seedhi shayri likhi hai us mein say hamein apni yeh wali kuch had achi lagi hai!
    Is mein hum nay shayri kay qawaid -zawabat ko made-nazar rakhnay ki koshish ki hai.
    LEKIN, aik mistake phir bhi hai, aik shair mein hum radeef ki pabandi nahi ker sakay!
    Aap ki qeemti aa'ra ka intizar rahey ga!

    tanhanahihien - Aisa Nahi Hai Kay Tanha Nahi Hein!
    bahot khoob Hijab saahiba,achhi koshish rahi yeh aap ki,
    radeef to aap ne jaan liya ke aek sheir main radeef badal gaya hai,lekin qaafiya par kon sochey ga,
    aap ne is ghazal main qaafiya ka bilkul khayaal naheen rakha,yeh achhi baat naheen,ghazal main teen cheezain,bahot zaroori hai,radeef,qaafiya,aor behar,(wazn),behar par to ham ba.ad main baat karain ge,jab us ka mazmoon post ho ga,lekin radeef aor qaafiya to ab aap jaanti ho,
    chalain jaldi se aek aor ghazal likh daaliye,aor us main radeef aor qaafiya ka khayaal bhi rakhiye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  10. 28-04-2008, 03:05 AM #10
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    ho maohabbat mein rafaaqat yeh zaroori toh nahi hai

    zaberdast Hijab
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