Suno......

[Rani]

suno aisa socha nahi kartay,
barrhaye qaddam roka nahi kartay,

dil dariya hai mohabbat ka,
dekho issay sehra nahi kartay,

teri aankhien parrtay hain ghor say,
mager unn-mein dekha nahi kartay,

roaz na milo toh na sahi,
jisam ko rooh say juda nahi kartay,

chand say pooch lo kabhi tum,
abb hum raat ko soya nahi kartay.

Rani

[~*Rano*~]

acha likha hai rani....keep writing...

[naz]

wah jee ap bhi

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

chand say pooch lo kabhi tum,
abb hum raat ko soya nahi kartay.

Wah Rani ji kamal ka shair kha hay

FeamNAllah

[Rani]

thanks everyone for liking it

[~*~Mehar~*~]

chand say pooch lo kabhi tum,
abb hum raat ko soya nahi kartay


wah ji bhhht khosurt lika hai


humy fata hi nahi tha k app yeh kaam b kerti ho


cholo apni sari ki sari poetry yaha share kero forn

[Rani]

thnx ji

abhi k abhi??

[~*~Mehar~*~]

haan na abi k abiiiiiiii

[primitive]

chand say pooch lo kabhi tum,
abb hum raat ko soya nahi kartay.
is shair nay to ghazab dha dia
boht hi deep feelings
goya kozay main samandar band kar dia
boht khoob

[Rani]

thnx ji