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  1. 06-05-2008, 11:30 PM #1
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    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    lo ji main phir se aa gaya,
    aek puraani,lekin aap ke liye nayi ghazal ke saath,
    bataaiye ga zaroor ke kesi lagi,
    bahot khush rahiye,


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    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  2. 07-05-2008, 06:58 AM #2
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    ahhhhhhhh........last shair kitna khubsurat hai
    itni deepness aur jazboun ka nichour.........oh my goodness
    kash hum bhi aap jaisa likh saktay
    lekin hum bohat khush hein kay atleast hamein aap ki poetry parnay ko tou milti hai
    waisay aap ki poetry ka intizar rehta hai........lekin aap kafi kanjousi say kaam letey hein
    I know kay aap sab aik din he nahi kerna chahtay........lekin phir bhi jaldi jaldi ker diya kijeay
    hamesha khush rahiye

    mataey..ka matlab bata dijeay ga!
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Waah Bhot khoob

    FeamnAllah
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    buhat umdha janab
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    wahh wahh janab.. kya baaat hai .. bari achi ghazal hai .. MashaAllah.. daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    chota monh bari baat: maqta ke pehly misry mein lafz bazam nahi bazm hota hai .. choonky wazn lafz bazam parhny se poora hota hai .. so is lehaz se socha ke aap ne isay bazam parha hoga.. gustakhi dar'guzer kijiye ga..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    wah kia baat hai

    hmsha ki terha bht bht bht khoobsurt gazal hai

    akhri shair mjy b bht acha laga

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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    wah buhat he khoobsurat..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    ahhhhhhhh........last shair kitna khubsurat hai
    itni deepness aur jazboun ka nichour.........oh my goodness
    kash hum bhi aap jaisa likh saktay
    lekin hum bohat khush hein kay atleast hamein aap ki poetry parnay ko tou milti hai
    waisay aap ki poetry ka intizar rehta hai........lekin aap kafi kanjousi say kaam letey hein
    I know kay aap sab aik din he nahi kerna chahtay........lekin phir bhi jaldi jaldi ker diya kijeay
    hamesha khush rahiye

    mataey..ka matlab bata dijeay ga!

    be had mamnoon hooN Hijab ke aap ne hamesha ki tarah ghazal pasand ki aor bahot pazeerayi se nawaza,
    yaqeenan aap mujh se bhi achha likh sakti haiN,bas mehnat karna shart hai,agar aap bhi mehnat se seekhaiN,to koyi wajah naheen ke aap mujh se bhi achha na likh sakain.
    agar bahot jaldi jaldi post karoon ga to phir aap ke saath saath baaqi sab bhi bore ho jaayain ge,aor yahi main naheen chaahata
    kheir,koshish karoon ga ke kuchh jaldi post kar diya karoon,bardaasht karna phir aap par hai,
    mataa.a,....arbi ka lafz hai,aor is ka matlab hai,...poonji,asaasa,dolat,.....mataa-e-dil,.....dil ka asaasa,dil ki dolat.
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Waah Bhot khoob

    FeamnAllah
    bahot shukriya bhahi,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    buhat umdha janab
    bahot shukriya Asif bhahi,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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