bohat achi hai dear![]()
bohat achi hai dear![]()
buhat umdha ..........
wah!!!! kiya kahnay hain!! dua tum nay to bila shuba boht achi or khoobsorat nazm likhi hay..dil ko cholaynay wali..bhot shari daad![]()
Bahoot khoob ji nice ji
wah bht zbrdst
u ka likhny ka style mjy hmsha say psnd hai
aik alg si baat hai![]()
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achhi koshish hai Dua saahiba,khaas tor se khayaal bahot achha hai,so daad qabool kijiye,
aek baat aor kehta chalooN,shaaid kuchh faaida de jaaye,
woh yeh ke aap ke khayalaat bahot khoobsurat hotey haiN,koshish kijiye ke andaaz-e-bayaan ko mazeed behtar banaayain,3 cheezain kissi bhi tehreer ko aasmaan pe pohancha deti haiN,...khayaal,...andaaz-e-bayaan,..alfaaz ka chunao.so ho sakey to is tarf bhi tawajah dijiye,
main un tamaam dostoN se bhi guzaarish karna chaahata hoon jo shaairy aor us ke mizaaj ko samajhtey haiN,ke PLEASE sirf wah wah na kiya kijiye,ke yeh kissi ko gumraah karney ke mutraadif hai,hosala afzaayi zaroor kijiye,lekin saath hi saath,likhney waaloN ki kami beishi ki bhi nishaandahi kar diya karain,ta ke woh kalaam main mazeed behtari peida kar sakain,
agar kissi ko bhi meri koyi baat achhi na lage to us ke liye ma.azarat.umeed hai dil pe naheen lain ge.![]()
Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN