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  1. 26-02-2008, 10:58 AM #1
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    snow **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB ,

    Meri aik tahreer jo kafi mudat pahaly likhi thi , SD ki nazar . Umeed hay pasnd ay gi . Islah -o-tanqeed farmaya .

    FeamnAllah

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  2. 26-02-2008, 10:09 PM #2
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    wah kiya kahnay hain...boht khoobsorat nasar likhi hay.. pr aik jumla kamal ka likha hay,,ye dil bhi to insaan kay jism main paywasta hi hay`` boht khoob likha hay,,paywasta ka jawab nahi..
    aakhri jumla aam fahm main to qabil e garift hay...magar jis bahao main aap nay ye baat kahi hay kay bandon say krli jaaiy to jurm q hay? boht khoobsorti say baat ada hoi hay...daad hay ji
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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Larke Hoker Ap ne Larki ke bare main likha qabl-e-ded hai janab yeh tu.bhot bhot acha likhne lage hian ap phele se zaida ...nikhar agaya hia nasar likhne main.
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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    bohat khubsurat likha hia BP
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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Quote Originally Posted by Ali-Zubair View Post
    wah kiya kahnay hain...boht khoobsorat nasar likhi hay.. pr aik jumla kamal ka likha hay,,ye dil bhi to insaan kay jism main paywasta hi hay`` boht khoob likha hay,,paywasta ka jawab nahi..
    aakhri jumla aam fahm main to qabil e garift hay...magar jis bahao main aap nay ye baat kahi hay kay bandon say krli jaaiy to jurm q hay? boht khoobsorti say baat ada hoi hay...daad hay ji

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    ji bhot shukriya aap ka k aap nay itnay dhyan sy parha aur apnay alfazo sy izzat ata ki

    Bhot shukriya , bus guzarish yahi hay k jhaan kami nazr ay hamesha islah karay

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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    Larke Hoker Ap ne Larki ke bare main likha qabl-e-ded hai janab yeh tu.bhot bhot acha likhne lage hian ap phele se zaida ...nikhar agaya hia nasar likhne main.

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    sab sy pahaly to aap ka Naz bntha shuker guzar hoon k aap nay itni khubsuart alfazo mai meri pazaraai ki , Ji ab likhna aa gya hay aur Al Hamdulilh is ka sara cradit aap seniors writters ko jata hay jin say mai nay seekha hay aur umeed hay INSHALLAH hamesha sikhany ka silsila jari rahy ga

    FeamnAllah
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  7. 27-02-2008, 05:19 PM #7
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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Quote Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
    bohat khubsurat likha hia BP
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Sab say pahalya ap ko Tah-e-Dil sy welcome ,

    Aur khushi hui k aap bhi yha ka hisa hay

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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainMidnight View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    sab sy pahaly to aap ka Naz bntha shuker guzar hoon k aap nay itni khubsuart alfazo mai meri pazaraai ki , Ji ab likhna aa gya hay aur Al Hamdulilh is ka sara cradit aap seniors writters ko jata hay jin say mai nay seekha hay aur umeed hay INSHALLAH hamesha sikhany ka silsila jari rahy ga

    FeamnAllah
    walaikum salam


    main tu bhool gaye likhna purana he likha hai jo share karti rahongi
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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    walaikum salam


    main tu bhool gaye likhna purana he likha hai jo share karti rahongi

    Asslaam-o-Alikum WR WB

    KU mai dubara Admi lay lijya

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    Default Re: **Qat-e-Hayat **By Sahil

    Dekhte hain kuch karte hain.
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