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    cute Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Sukoon dil ko kabhi meherban nahin hota,
    Tumahre jaisa ager razdan nahin hota.

    Hamare dum se hain gulshan main ronke kaayem,
    na hote hum to kabhi gulistan nahin hota.

    Hamare zabbte tehmmul ki daad de zalim,
    Yun zakhem khaa ke koi shaadma nahin hota.

    Nazer se hoti hai waakif Nazer mohabbat ki,
    Zuban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin hota.

    Wo poonchte hain kahan hai derd batao,
    Batain kya unhe hum, derd kahan nahin hota.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 28-04-2010 at 01:58 PM.

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    Default Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    nice....
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    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    Default Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    Default Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    nice gazal...
    Dont walk in front of me
    I may not follow
    Dont walk behind me
    I may not lead

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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by seven tiles View Post
    nice....
    R.M g


    Hi Seven Tiles,
    Bahut shukriya aapne
    pesh ki hui gazal ko
    pasand kiya. "nice RM g"
    Chalo koi to apna kherkhawa
    to mila. okay ST Bye Bye.

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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Tears View Post


    Hi Sajid, Thanks for appreciating
    the Gazal by clapping which shows
    U liked it. Yes aaope thread 90 hazaar
    touch kerne wale hain, Zara aur zor lagao.
    Lage raho Sajid bhai. Bye Bye.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 01-05-2010 at 10:49 PM.

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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by kiran zamaan View Post
    nice gazal...



    Hi Kiran, So nice of you for
    liking my presented Gazal.
    Thanks a lot and all the best.
    Hope 2 meet soon some where
    again till than Bye Bye.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 01-05-2010 at 11:01 PM.

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