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  1. 05-05-2010, 11:30 PM #1
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    Default aday e beniazi

    hum cheen lain gay tumse ye shan e beniazi
    tum mangte phiro gay apna ghuror humse,
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  2. 06-05-2010, 12:40 AM #2
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    Nice
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا
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  3. 06-05-2010, 04:02 PM #3
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    Default Re: aday e beniazi

    thanx ab ik naya shair likh diya to is pay nazar pari
    ab please kuch mat kehna wahan ans ker daina
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  4. 08-05-2010, 11:33 PM #4
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    Default Re: aday e beniazi

    'Mangte phiroge apna garoor humse.'
    Kabile tareef share pesh kiya aapne
    Shizzz. Kya kehne hain. Pl. keep it up.
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